I woke up in the middle of the night and came up with this!
Snow, it’s deadly charm
Fills you with a false wonder
Then strikes a swift blow
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01 Oct 2011 4 Comments
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I woke up in the middle of the night and came up with this!
Snow, it’s deadly charm
Fills you with a false wonder
Then strikes a swift blow
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All Text Copyright © 2011 Annie Green ( Trudy Chappell) All Rights Reserved
zumpoems
Oct 01, 2011 @ 22:36:59
Very direct! Well done! Good overall effect — trying to determine what created this a nothing overally striking in any given word or phrase, however the overall effect is very effective and just has a sense of perfection to it.,
Annie
Oct 01, 2011 @ 22:58:23
Wow! Perfection?? I think not but thank you for the compliment. It came about in the early hours of the morning. I woke up, got a drink and this just came to me. I’ve no idea where from.
wanderingskyward
Oct 02, 2011 @ 10:15:39
You are so good at Haiku!!!! 🙂 Love it!
Annie
Oct 02, 2011 @ 10:24:41
Aww! Thank you, but I’m not that good. Lol. They are fun though. Hows your blog coming along.