This Is An Odd One

I woke up in the middle of the night and came up with this!

Snow, it’s deadly charm

Fills you with a false wonder

Then strikes a swift blow

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All Text Copyright © 2011 Annie Green ( Trudy Chappell) All Rights Reserved

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. zumpoems
    Oct 01, 2011 @ 22:36:59

    Very direct! Well done! Good overall effect — trying to determine what created this a nothing overally striking in any given word or phrase, however the overall effect is very effective and just has a sense of perfection to it.,

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    • Annie
      Oct 01, 2011 @ 22:58:23

      Wow! Perfection?? I think not but thank you for the compliment. It came about in the early hours of the morning. I woke up, got a drink and this just came to me. I’ve no idea where from.

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  2. wanderingskyward
    Oct 02, 2011 @ 10:15:39

    You are so good at Haiku!!!! 🙂 Love it!

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